"The Beams of the Sun"

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    This poem is the 5th and final in a series of Short poems I am doing..
    It tell how the tragic story on how a person that  cannot bare to show his true self will never be happy.

    1)Scarlet Moon
    2)The Black Flowers of Death 
    3)Metamorphosis
    4)Faith for the Faithless
    5)The Beams of the Sun

    I'm still working on the next one. If you like The Poem(s)
    Let me know i love feed back.

    Thanks for your time
    Your friend and fellow poet
    Grim

    "The Beams of the Sun"

    "The Beams of the Sun"

    ..Time Stands still as the life is drained from their withering body's..
    ..All the pain and suffering of living comes to an abrupt halt..
    ..The red beams of light that once fed their faith..
    ..Have been pushed aside by the force of day..

    ..The Flowers..
    ..To scared too embrace the beams of the sun..
    ..Crawl down to their roots..
    ..And whisper as they die..
    .."Don't Judge Me"..


    A poem by: TheAngelOfDeath

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    sol46jones commented on "The Beams of the Sun"

    07-04-2009

    Hm!! Interesting, sort of a satiritcal nature. Point of interest is too dark for me to relate. Sorry, but thats the best I can do.
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    FiloRozzell commented on "The Beams of the Sun"

    07-02-2009

    Only God can judge me, noone else can throw stones without sin...I love the short stuff can say so much
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    beautifuldeath commented on "The Beams of the Sun"

    07-02-2009

    lonely and abandoned, starving for acceptance. Once again you amaze me. loved it. (as usual) :-) 10 from me
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    joyful commented on "The Beams of the Sun"

    07-01-2009

    Silent and long suffering can drain and crush your hopes and dreams. In those trials and tribulation, time seems to stand still espeically if your dieing a hopeless death. This is what I understood. Great and unique write.
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    sk8ergirl commented on "The Beams of the Sun"

    07-01-2009

    wow that was really good all i can say is wow wow wow it was so good
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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