"Broken but not dead"

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"Broken but not dead"

"Broken but not dead"

...Heavy heart...
...born with no soul...
...on the wrong path with no motivation to do anything but grow old...
...life with no meaning...
...Oh wait...
...I found one...
...How will it turn out this time?...
...Im doubtfull...
...but love has meaning and it forms its own way...
...as I watch the next sunrise...
...I greet the next day...
...hopefull and happy...
...but does she feel the same way?...
...If it goes wrong this time I guess ill just blame it on the bay...
...What should I say?...
...What should I do?...
...How should I feel?...
...Its just so hard to discribe when your feeling somthing real...
...life is a mystery but love isn't a game...
...If you play your cards right its alot better than fame...
...I can do without the money, the jobs, or the cars...
...All I need is you right here in my arms...

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1990lh commented on "Broken but not dead"

06-13-2011

great poem as always, love your work. hugs. hope all is well with ya

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

TheAngelOfDeath’s Poems (86)

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"Murderous intent" 1
Tainted soul 2
"Broken but not dead" 1
"Spring,Summe
r,Fall,Winter
" (Repost)
11
"One fine day in the middle of the night" 8
"Restless" Dedcated to her memory 7
"Drawing a Blank" 10
Raging Sanity Prt 4 2
"Raging Sanity Part 3" 3
"Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2" 9
"The Maniac Part 8" 6
"The Maniac Part 7" 4
"The Maniac Part 6" 5
"The Maniac Part 5" 5
"The Maniac Part 4" 6
"The Maniac Part 3" 8
The Maniac part 2 13
"The Maniac Part 1" 14
"The Mirror of Fate" 6
"The Beams of the Sun" 7
"Beautiful Death" 5
"Faith for the Faithless" 1
"Metamorphosi
s"
2
"The Black Flowers Of Death" 3
"The Thief" 6
"The Weary Traveler" 6
"Spring,Summe
r,Fall,Winter
"
16
"Scarlet Moon" 17
"The Replacement" Revised 6
My Hell 1
Soiled 6
The Teacher 5
The Earth's Rebirth Part 2 4
Dance of Death 1
(..From the beginning to the end..) 4
..The Face Of Death.. -7
"Angel of War" 4
(..The Earths Rebirth..Part 1) 2
..Gossamer Heart.. 4
..Who am I?.. 7
..I once had love.. 18
..The Devil's Black Thrown..(I remember) 5
..Thinking of you.. 3
..Forever.. 8
Feet First 10
..Daze of War.. 33
..The Valley Of The Shadow Of Death.. 4
Love..Hate..H
armony
8
..Alone with myself.. 2
Inflicting Dreams 3
Mocking Words 2
Death's Decay 3
The Economy 2
The Road Of Time 3
La Santa Muerte 10
The Calling 1
Waiting to Die 1
The Perfect Death 4
Poetry Speaks 3
Death's Embrace 9
My Life 9
Ghostless Shell 11
List Of The Unholy 14
Despair.. 12
Betrayed 11
The Unborn 5
Pulsing thoughts 6
Decaying Alive 8
Dead Seeds 4
The Suffering 22
Black Label 16
Storm Of The Calm 4
Never Enough part 2 2
Judgement 6
Third Ey\e Blind 1
Face of the truth 3
a wasted life 11
Moving on... 3
Unbreakable 3
Forever 5
Fate 4
Red Rose 11
Dark,Light 1
Eternal 7
Deaths Angel 12