a wasted life

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    a wasted life
    Torn and scorn bettween to roads
    is a heart that can no longer bare...
    death to the soul is harsh and untold
    for he sees his life leads nowhere...
    a life with no purpose is no life at all..
    a life with no meaning is dim..
    a life with no guidance spins out of control..
    and a life with no love is a sin..
    when somone cant be what anouther expects it can kill a person inside..
    time cannot heal..
    the damage is done..
    the life that he lives is a lie..
    why hold your life to someone elses beliefs..
    when you feel in your heart its not true..
    why do what they say..
    why sing what they sing..
    why dance to their foolish ways!
    why love what they love..
    why hate what they hate..
    why limit yourselves to their fears!
    i tell the truth and more..
    to a wasted life i shall shed no tears.

    For a man who cant live his life without anouthers control is nothing but a pawn in the game of fate...





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    darkneverfades commented on a wasted life

    05-19-2009

    wowwww love it!!
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    Blade commented on a wasted life

    05-05-2009

    I really like this poem. You're right, you as a person sould be the only one to deem what is to be your fate. If you let others decide for you, then your life is meaningless andhas no point but to be a minion of a stronger being's
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    Blade commented on a wasted life

    05-05-2009

    I really like this poem. You're right, you as a person sould be the only one to deem what is to be your fate. If you let others decide for you, then your life is meaningless andhas no point but to be a minion of a stronger being's
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    optimistic commented on a wasted life

    05-04-2009

    Excellent! I feel your pain.
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    rachelnf417 commented on a wasted life

    05-04-2009

    I really like your poem. I feel the same. But, love makes us all change regardless of how much we fight it, for if we don't we die alone. What kind of life is that?
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