"On Pleasure I Land"

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    Disclaimer: I am not generally referring to women when I use the word...which is defined in the dictionary as a female dog...so please don't try to peg me as a defamation station. Other than that...this one is pretty straight forward. Do enjoy if you please :)

    "On Pleasure I Land"

     On Pleasure I Land

    I've got a story to tell...
    and it's not my fault that it's gory as hell...
    full of guts...there's some glory as well.
    We're in the ward of the Lord with euphoric intel...

    yet...

    shores full of whores...what the emporium sells.
    Beaches full of bitches...just enjoy yourselves.
    It's easy to do the devils work...
    just employ yourself...

    and leave inhibitions on the 'annoyance' shelf

    Ecstatic pill poppers swallow viruses at high rates...
    population not irate...
    as long as pelvises gyrate...
    vibrate...
    fluid leaks...
    migrates...
    lack of acquisition makes...
    crime rates...
    high stakes.

    I should be better for my sake...
    enlightenment might make...
    my mind's eye dilate...
    which causes me to be disgusted at...
    the sight around my state...

    no...wait....
    I found another cutie on myspace.

    Shores full of whores...what the emporium sells.
    Beaches full of bitches...just enjoy yourselves.
    It's easy to do the devils work...
    just employ yourself...

    and leave inhibitions on the 'annoyance' shelf  

    Come enjoy your stay...be buoyant...swell.
    Feel free to buy the AIDS the employees...sell...
    or the 49 other flavors with the inglorious smells.
    Share a room for two with 'what's her name'...

    kiss...tell...

    lust...gush..
    writhe...quell...
    desires...fires...
    burn...yell.

    No consequences exist on this pleasure island.
    A tainted hymen...still a treasure...
    just a...lesser diamond.

    Bells of pressure have long since chimed in...
    keep thinking..."Every time innocence is lost...I win".

    And rest assured...even if this is your last stand...
    at least you can say...

    On pleasure
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    I 
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    Land
      
    © 2010 Malik Peterson. All Rights Reserved.

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    frog commented on "On Pleasure I Land"

    03-16-2010

    This is a powerful poem that speaks the truth on so many levels. Definately a great read!
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    MalikPeterson

    03/22/2010

    thank you so much cuz. I am really glad you liked it...and appreciate you making some time for me :)

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on "On Pleasure I Land"

    03-14-2010

    Well this poem certainly is an eye opener. To the point for sure. .
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    MalikPeterson

    03/22/2010

    Thank you much for dropping by...glad it opened your eyes :)

    queeniecup commented on "On Pleasure I Land"

    03-11-2010

    What do you do with a naughy boy or girl? Send him/her to Pleasure Isand! Nicely articulated :-)
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    MalikPeterson

    03/11/2010

    thank you much Ms. Cup. I appreciate your comments and your time...just keep those naughty girls away from me...especially if they are contagious lol :)

    1blackbarbie commented on "On Pleasure I Land"

    03-09-2010

    this was a very well written and it gave me a visual. I loved it.
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    MalikPeterson

    03/11/2010

    thanks so much barbie...glad you could see it :)

    Ming commented on "On Pleasure I Land"

    03-04-2010

    Truth . . ! and a chronicle of the times in which we live.. Well done my brother. Much Love -Ming
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    MalikPeterson

    03/05/2010

    Thanks ming...glad you found it to be well done...appreciate you stopping by.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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