MY LITTLE SANDCASTLE

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    MY LITTLE SANDCASTLE

      

     

    Life is like a sandcastle.

    Though I build and mold,

    The tide is always there.

    The thousands of grains,

    Grains used for creation.

    Slide away into the churning foam.

    I ask and wonder how and why,

    But no answer comes to me.

    What significance does this hold

    is there a hidden meaning?

    If so, is it only a dream?

    All the pain I feel inside,

    It eats away at my soul.

     

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    soulwriter commented on MY LITTLE SANDCASTLE

    09-24-2009

    Very poetically stated and a poem that I often thought of writing and here it is for me to read, reflect upon and to enjoy - thank you for your creation!
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    Lolee commented on MY LITTLE SANDCASTLE

    09-24-2009

    You are certainly a poet within your own right! This is one of the best I've read in a long time...wonderful!
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    satch commented on MY LITTLE SANDCASTLE

    07-24-2009

    Everyone experiences collapsed dreams and we forget to always build on a firm foundation. great poem'
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    wheelsal commented on MY LITTLE SANDCASTLE

    06-26-2009

    I find your poetry halfway to genius. This is high as one of your best...................................
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    am2anangel

    06/26/2009

    you are very kind thank you.

    HarverTomsson commented on MY LITTLE SANDCASTLE

    06-17-2009

    This is one of your most evocative pieces. Even wothout your brief bio I would know you have faced great odds and did not let that daunt you from trying.
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    am2anangel

    06/18/2009

    thank you for your kind words and taking the time to comment on my work.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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