My Alone Time

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    My Alone Time
    Hey wait for me
    Don't go just yet
    I'm nearly ready
    Didn't forget

    Wasn't I right?
    The plan was for six?
    Oh, it was for five?
    Gee, I'm in a fix

    Can't wait for me?
    Gotta go now?
    Then tell all "I'm sorry,
    "Can they forgive me somehow?"

    Well, bye now, have fun
    So sorry they won't see me
    Whew dodged another bullet!
    Now for popcorn and T.V.

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    ccslim commented on My Alone Time

    11-30-2009

    Cracked me up! I was almost ready but never mind got things to do and this time its not about you! Nice write to look wishy washy but have a underlying direction!
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    Writer1

    11/30/2009

    I'm so glad you enjoyed the humor intended (many a truth is made in jest). :) Thx so much for your comment!!

    Rhymer commented on My Alone Time

    11-30-2009

    Nice very nice and a well written reminder of how hectic life can become. Rhymer www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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    Writer1

    11/30/2009

    Thx, Rhymer. Sometimes you gotta just slooooow down. :) I appreciate your comment very much!

    dahlusion commented on My Alone Time

    11-25-2009

    A whirlwind of life's madness for the things we love. Bravo!!
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    Writer1

    11/29/2009

    Thank you! I guess most writers are people who need their space. :) I appreciate your comment very much!

    monkyntz commented on My Alone Time

    11-24-2009

    very cute your own time is very important a nice read god ending
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    Writer1

    11/25/2009

    Too bad we have tell our "little white lies" to get our alone time. We ALL want it...it should be understood. :) Glad you read and found it cute. That was DEF my intent!

    bklynrizz commented on My Alone Time

    11-24-2009

    A cute and fun read. You gotta put yourself first sometimes.
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    Writer1

    11/25/2009

    It was meant to be cute and fun...and the older I get, the more I DEMAND my "me" time. :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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