I saw your face

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    Poem Commentary

    It happens in an instant, and for a wishful moment in time, we still pray for eternal love, knowing it maybe never was.

    I saw your face

    There is

    A smile on your face

                Without consideration

    For the place

                Seeing you

                            Takes my heart

    I am

    Still desiring to be seen

                Without consideration

    For the place

                Seeing you

                            Takes my heart

     

    Are you also

    Desiring to be seen

                Without consideration

    For the place

                Seeing me

                            Takes your heart?

     

    There is

    A smile on my face

                Without consideration

    For the place

                Seeing me

                            Takes your heart.

     

    (c)11610609p PMJeanMarie

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    thecross commented on I saw your face

    01-11-2011

    wonderfully written the questions chip away at curiosity well done
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    jeanpnkldyg

    01/11/2011

    Thanks for taking the time to read...I did have strong urgings at the time of this writing that resurface from time to time....

    dahlusion commented on I saw your face

    03-24-2010

    "There is A smile on my face Without consideration" — I love this line! beautiful poem. Bravo!!
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    StandingBear commented on I saw your face

    02-01-2010

    You are so right Jean Marie. Though all is predetermined in life, we never know until the moment strikes us. We never give up. Fine write!
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    WordSlinger commented on I saw your face

    01-16-2010

    I like this, did you know if you smile all the time it is contagious, outrageous huh, :) ty WS
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