Fly Away

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    Fly Away

    I release you into the air

                And yet

    You linger for a while

    Longing to leave your impression

     

    I declare you must fly away

                And find

    Where your happiness lives

    Leaving me to find my own

     

    You have flown away

                To find

    The happiness you deserve

    Leaving me to discover my own

     

    511101005PJean Marie

     

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    Insideme commented on Fly Away

    04-14-2011

    I really do like this one. It sounds as if you are speaking of a butterfly or wing mended bird on the surface but it also conveys the reality beyond. To me that reality is that we must sometimes set the things we love free whether it be another person, place or thing but most importantly I think it is speaking about setting yourself free from what weights your souls wings. This has touched parts of me that I have been dealing with lately and I agree it is something you must do over and over....
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    jeanpnkldyg

    04/18/2011

    I'm happy to hear these words resonated with you, and wish you well on your journey.

    sanctus commented on Fly Away

    02-22-2011

    Right to the point. nicely constructed..............
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    jeanpnkldyg

    02/22/2011

    Thank you.

    RKCHOWDARY11 commented on Fly Away

    02-22-2011

    simple, sweet and awesome poem with nice feeling and good meaning. keep it up.
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    jeanpnkldyg

    02/22/2011

    Thank you for your kind comment.

    alb29oclfl commented on Fly Away

    02-22-2011

    I have found with in myself, that letting go is the hardest of all steps to take, a wonderful write
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    jeanpnkldyg

    02/22/2011

    It is a constant process...and thank you

    andy2103 commented on Fly Away

    02-22-2011

    Short and sweet. An optimistic view on break-ups. I dig it ;)
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    jeanpnkldyg

    02/22/2011

    It took a long time...:)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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