A Confused Heart

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  • Devotion

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    i dont know what to think....

    A Confused Heart

     I'm obsessed with you
    Not as scary as it seems
    My love just can't be true
    Even though you steal my dreams

    Each and every night
    As i glide smoothly into sleep
    Thinking of you dosen't feel right
    Since you're not mine to keep

    The wry sun steals you away
    Blinding me so i can't see
    I call your name and stumble astray
    But when i wake you're not next to me

    It unravles this way everytime
    But still i long for you
    Perhaps love would give this reason and rhyme
    So i pray my heart's yearnings are true.

    By: Liz Prosser

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    HarverTomsson commented on A Confused Heart

    08-17-2011

    Oh, those demon crushes! So all absorbing and demanding. Not at all like love. But enjoyable in a masochistic sort of way. I like this one. Maybe more than I should. . .
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on A Confused Heart

    08-16-2011

    I like the word obsessed in this poem because when every thought turns to the would be love where is the freedom that one would give love if there is no freedom in your own mind from the thought of the love that can not be.
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