Unable

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    Unable

     I am sitting here
    trying to think
    finding myself
    without a brink
    oh exhulation or exicution
    where i can lose my evolution
    fi nding myself hurtling back
    lost at once amid this stack
    so high, so tall, so very unstable
    peering upward into blinding light'
    i may be unable

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    MalikPeterson commented on Unable

    03-22-2010

    interesting...how exactly does this poem builder work? :)
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    Lizziewriter27

    03/29/2010

    its game thing lol it times you, and it kind of makes you put the first thing that comes to your mind. You should try it :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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