wish
you see through eyes like mine to the soul behind the wall, the pain covered up before the fall, stumbling around at bay falling ,tumbling down all around with know one to catch me when i fall, but one day i hope by fate to run into your embrace.wish
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- jenifer
- alert but not enough sleep . hope my poems please thee.
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jademelissa74 commented on wish
08-12-2009
- The reflection you offer through this piece is well perceived. At face value, this is a longing piece. Great read for me!
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06-01-2009
- Again another one to read and like. You have felt pain obviously but I admire your coping abilities. Just keep it coming
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