Missing a part.........of the heart
my heart is missing a part, to make it work. It's not like a heartbreak it's more like a mechincal part, a fracture of a sort. pain has caused it so. abuse of it's muscle not a complete break. More from it's owner giving more than she can take. abused here and there caused it's fracture, not just a clean heart break. it can't even give a lil or come together for a little bit, to work the engine but not the brain. a flicker of happyness comes here and there but it's gone before it really had a start. a fracture of the heart.Missing a part.........of the heart
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Tags: Life
- jenifer
- alert but not enough sleep . hope my poems please thee.
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dahlusion commented on Missing a part.........of the heart
04-26-2014
- I love the "cubist" look of your poem's construction, much like the French surrealist poet, Pierre Reverdy (1889--1960), the first Cubist Poet. The honesty in this poem is refreshing. Bravo, poet!
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517Jacqueline commented on Missing a part.........of the heart
04-19-2014
- Hi Jennifer, I thought your poem will loook like a poem if you divide it into 4. Or you can use quatrain with a couplet. Over all it all talked about your heart, nice piece.
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04/26/2014
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