passion exists
passion exist in us and is created with us and belongs to us , and grows as we do and is created as we are from thought and need and seed and air and the planes of the ground and of this world that were created with and to live abone and enjoy with the truth of the need that makes us whole and lets see and be bold. passion is all some of us know and all some of us want and all some of us can ever hope for for love is something thought unobtainable and unrecieveable to us and to the others who follow us in this long neverending journey of the life and death of the world and its people . passion is here and now and then and around ,it dies like we do with the ground with the dirt with the earth and the gods and the smells and the food and the harmony of its creaters.passion exists
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- jenifer
- alert but not enough sleep . hope my poems please thee.
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ApaqRasgirl commented on passion exists
09-11-2010
- that was a wonderful read dear, though it would have been a little better read had you broke it up a bit......still a great write.....thanks for sharing...love asha
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kdarcy commented on passion exists
09-11-2010
- I love the concept of it being run together, though it does make it a bit slower to read, you covered all the elements well, I enjoyed the read, be well
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