condensation
condensation its meaning is evident , but its effect on others isn't always so oviance. the effect before it is rain , and tears and sometimes even blood before evaporation. the pain from these is sometimes sutle, and sometimes grand . though it is pain all the same ,even sometimes to the land. these moments may be brief or however long, but they are noticed again and again threw time. a tear may drop from eye or be cried out in torment or pain, or sadness or longing or rage. rain may fall , and bring down those who stand in or against it. the tunnels of passion may be swept by it . or cast to be never ending just like the feel of the rain.condensation
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Tags: Sadness
- jenifer
- alert but not enough sleep . hope my poems please thee.
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Tempestlady commented on condensation
11-05-2011
- Nice, more like a prose in it's structure and format, however that being said the message nad meanings were insightful. Write on........Tlady
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soulwriter commented on condensation
11-04-2011
- You have wonderful and beautiful thoughts,,,, your emotions are true and your words are pure. I have to add as an insightful comment ... your work reads more like a blog - run together without thought to capitalization and sometime punctuation or grammar - I must superseed that observation with the fact that people express through many styles and yours is unique and true to yourself so your captured written words are to be greatly valued. Write ON! Soul
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