anothers arms
hopelessly falling into your arms, tis a wish if only . but a wish to bittersweet for two of truths to meet, to seek soldence in anothers arms to hide from the wait of the world in anothers embrace. to share our loves and devoutions and triumphs and tribulations with one who will hold us oh so dear. embraceanothers arms
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- jenifer
- alert but not enough sleep . hope my poems please thee.
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MOMofTWINS commented on anothers arms
06-05-2009
- I enjoyed reading this, it sounds very honest and true to your heart..... Keep up the good work!!!!!
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Cosmos commented on anothers arms
06-04-2009
- I enjoyed your poem. It really pulled me in and made me feel the passion behind it. I like your choice of words and the cohesion of your piece as a coherent whole. My only advice, (which is pretty trivial but important to some) is the grammar. There are a couple mispeled words in your piece. Other than that I really liked it.
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