Who are You

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  • Fantasy

    Who are You
    Are your eyes blue,
    or a haze of grey?

    I wonder.

    Is sushi your thing,
    or thick red meat?

    I wonder.

    Do you walk,
    or do you dance
    with the oceans' waves?

    I wonder.

    Is your voice strong
    yet gentle,
    like the words
    you write?

    I wonder.

    Would our lips
    fit perfect
    in every crevasse
    we could find?

    I wonder.


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    JadedJezzabel commented on Who are You

    07-31-2009

    VERY NICE....UNKNOWN INFATUATION.....CAN BE HOTT SOMETIMES
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    mspoetris

    08/05/2009

    VERY-FANTASIES TO ME HAVE ALWAYS BEEN BETTER THAN FACT!tHANKS-AS i ALWAYS HAVE HIGHEST RESPECT FOR YOUR FEEDBACK.MOLLY

    WordSlinger commented on Who are You

    07-03-2009

    lol this reminds of Ulyseuis, the movie in the restaraunt scene. Wondering, whats on the menu the people or the food.lol
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    mspoetris

    07/04/2009

    Ha!It fits right in there.Only you could see the simularities.But I do now! T.Y. Mr WS.

    namnoiz commented on Who are You

    05-16-2009

    really nice poem !!!
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    mspoetris

    05/30/2009

    Thank you. Since these new changed, I didn't even know you'd com.

    lightcourier commented on Who are You

    05-04-2009

    Dunno. But I know what direction this is heading! lol Very erotic. Nice work!
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    dahlusion commented on Who are You

    04-21-2009

    I wonder too…
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    mspoetris

    07/04/2009

    You don't really wonder-do you?

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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