Drivers Ed.

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    Drivers Ed.
    They say life is like a two lane street.
    Honey-- Listen.
    It's a fifteen lane highway.
    Every direction,
    every idea,
    constantly colliding,
    without insurance.

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    mbryant53 commented on Drivers Ed.

    12-08-2009

    I see you use very little words but speak in volumes. Bravo!
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    Hanna commented on Drivers Ed.

    07-07-2009

    how concisely you can pinpoint the meaning of concepts that are so difficult ( life, spirituality- I am sure there is more) with words so few. The power you give to simple terms is amazing
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    phoenixhope commented on Drivers Ed.

    05-31-2009

    Very true! It's just how it is... some collisions are deadly, some are just to wake you up, others are just too cautious it leads them to more disaster...
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    lightcourier commented on Drivers Ed.

    05-04-2009

    Excellent work, but then I like richard brautigan. This was very poignant and very funny. It might not meet the five rules for passing a poetic license, but it is an excellent piece of work. Thanks!
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    mspoetris

    05/30/2009

    what is a poetic license? Poets are free-in a way.thank you for reading. I won't pay.I love a good protest!

    FoF commented on Drivers Ed.

    03-19-2009

    A so-so poem in itself - but what a great jumping off point. I feel like this most of time. Write it.
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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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