Welcome to Hell

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  • Realization

    Welcome to Hell
                    Welcome! Welcome!
                   
                    I've waited for you,

                    now - tell me -
                   
                    what did you do?                    
                   
                    Walk past the needy,

                    ignoring you knew?


                  
                    Or was it more sinister,

                    thought through and

                    well planned?

                    I see you have
                   
                    blood -
                  
                    smeared on your hands.


                    You humans don't get it.

                    Selfishly laughing-

                    opened-eyed blind,

                    Each tear you cause others,

                    is YOUR choice,

                    NOT MINE!

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    jj1562 commented on Welcome to Hell

    03-27-2013

    I loved this so powerful in so few words wonderful!
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    mspoetris

    03/27/2013

    Wow... Thank you so very much!

    JadedJezzabel commented on Welcome to Hell

    11-20-2010

    dont know how i missed this one......you answered my challenge and i'm honored by that........this was poeticly awe inspiring and its interesting to me the many who did answer the challenge had such vastly different takes on hell......love it
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    Karma885 commented on Welcome to Hell

    10-02-2009

    DAMNNNNN I LIKED THIS POEM YES!. SO POWERFUL. I LOVED HOW IF FLOWS AND STR8 TO THE POINT . ITS SO TRUE. SOME TIMES USEHUMEN'S DONT KNO HOW MUCH PAIN WE CAUSE. THIS POEM GETS A 10
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    mspoetris

    10/02/2009

    Thank you- I have revised it since-will post new version. Again- Thank you!

    soulwriter commented on Welcome to Hell

    09-09-2009

    This piece is very thought provoking and intertwined with sin and full of questioning... Why is it that pain is repetitive and sometimes without restriction or earnest conviction?! Quite well written!
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    mspoetris

    09/09/2009

    Thank you,soulwriter Man lives by man. not by soul,which some call 'gut' feeling. Ego is his demon,others are destroyed as they venture into his path(man)Be come like wax-piss will not be able to penetrate. Again-thank you.

    Hanna commented on Welcome to Hell

    07-07-2009

    INterersting view on humans not so kind - soon we must know that we all become THE NEEDY- but what is need and what is just plain lazy
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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