Highrise Treats
Cold winter's night.What dances behind
those dim lit windows?
Flesh colored bodies,
entwined,unaware,
of clear glass reflections
Every shadow a life,
dancing against the wall,
living fantasies
without a worry,
of who has
binoculars.
Highrise Treats
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Tags: Reality , Thought Provoking
What dances behind
those dim lit windows?
Flesh colored bodies,
entwined,unaware,
of clear glass reflections
Every shadow a life,
dancing against the wall,
living fantasies
without a worry,
of who has
binoculars.
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kdarcy commented on Highrise Treats
05-24-2010
- You have posted this elsewhere, I left comment there. I still love it, be well, k
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dancinghawk commented on Highrise Treats
09-17-2009
- love this glimpse of glimpsing ... so many humans on the planet ... thx for posting!
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Hampton commented on Highrise Treats
09-17-2009
- A very appropriate and clever title for this simple yet image packed work.
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dahlusion commented on Highrise Treats
09-14-2009
- A perfect little gem of poetic order describing the night moves of sensuality: let me be the peeping tom — please, please!
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09/14/2009
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bandit1192 commented on Highrise Treats
09-03-2009
- I liked this. The first two verses are ( what I might concider )haiku. But, what do I know. I could picture the peeping Tom with his binoculars spying on the neighbors. Good poem, TS
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09/03/2009
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