Satin or Rust

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    Satin or Rust
    I can almost seize your depth.
    Brass rings dangle,
    just centimeters from my soul.
    Winds blow your being
    beneath the very hairs of my skin.
    I am thrown into your personal
    sea of kaleidoscopic spirals.

    If I set my heart free,
    love can be the ultimate
    gift,
    or my darkest hour.

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    StandingBear commented on Satin or Rust

    07-14-2009

    A nicely written work relating up and down aspects of love. Great write.
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    kdarcy commented on Satin or Rust

    05-23-2009

    I sense you have both let it go, again held it when it returned- but only for a time and letting go once more to find its way home again. We live both, with and without at the same time.
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    mspoetris

    05/30/2009

    Always. Thanks for reading. I'm still learning the new changes.

    lightcourier commented on Satin or Rust

    05-04-2009

    If our foresight was only as good as our hindend we could foretell such. Excellent work. Thanks!
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    FoF commented on Satin or Rust

    03-19-2009

    My first inclination is that a spiral goes down. Nice comparison of ultimate gift and darkest hour.
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    bandit1192 commented on Satin or Rust

    02-27-2009

    Which will it be Ms Un? seems you have a dilema. TS
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