when my soul danced

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    when my soul danced
    i remember your
    eyes; sanctuaries of warmth
    enveloping me.

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    wildpendigus commented on when my soul danced

    06-25-2009

    I thimnk this is one of your better poems, could be a short song and story line could turn out very nice since I produce and write I can hear drums, rythmn section as real funky groove, good luck! grecowong@yahoo.com
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    DSLitz

    06/25/2009

    a song with so few words? why thank you...

    Stark commented on when my soul danced

    04-27-2009

    Yes! I finally found someone else on here who wrote a haiku :) Also, this rocks. Simple, elegant, encompasses a nice message, and I like how the title can work as a line of the poem.
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    dahlusion commented on when my soul danced

    01-05-2009

    I will think of you when I sit awake at night… the simplicity of this one is like a literary avalanche
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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