What Should We Do...?

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    What Should We Do...?

    I used to love you in all the worst ways. I can't figure out now if the honeymoon is over, or if the thrill is gone.

    I want {ed} this forever, and the idea is still sweet, but which road to not take: the path to redemption, or already gone?

    I don't understand the 'used to' part.
    I mean how does that happen?

    One day all I could think about was you
    Now all I can think about is that one day, all I could think about is you...

    So, umm, what should we do...?




    DANK
    07-05-2010

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    EL26 commented on What Should We Do...?

    07-08-2010

    got me thinking " One day all I could think about was you Now all I can think about is that one day, all I could think about is you..." damn nice double meaning there
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    DANK

    07/09/2010

    yea, funny how a bit of time changes things huh?

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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