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    I never thought that there would ever not be a me and, you know, "us"...
    I'd forgotten how everything you taste can taste like dust...
    I planned to be there forever, for better or worse
    I sure didn't expect to end up feeling cursed
    Consumed with self-doubt and so God awful WORN OUT
    So in spite of loving you in ways I can't understand
    I can't see any choice but to let go of your hand
    Yah, I'm scared of what letting go means now
    And yah, I can't even pretend that I really know how
    But you've called the dance, I'm just following your lead
    How could you tell me you loved me and just sit there watching my heart bleed?

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    EL26 commented on untitled

    07-09-2010

    yo i asked my self the question of the last line like a million times and come to the conclusion that love is only something we feel nowadays its too emotional where is the love that can weather any storm it seems it only exist in poetry and psalms too damn bad tho love this one DANK keep shitting on those who only momentarily love since i love you fo life Dad.
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    DANK

    07/09/2010

    Just to allay any doubts Son, this piece came out of the whole Texas experiment, though I can see now where it has a more general application... I Love You Too My Boy, more than you know! Dad

    SallyLoBurgio commented on untitled

    07-06-2010

    A place we've all been and you've shared it so vividly. Thank you.
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    DANK

    07/06/2010

    Thank you Sally!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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