Right At The Start

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This piece is a few years old, perhaps me at my shyt talking best.  Anyway it's for sure the piece most of my {dare I say "fans"} always ask for when I do a reading, and of course it seems to be a perfect 1st poem for this new forum...

Right At The Start

RIGHT AT THE START

C' mere little one let me put the phunc in yo' thighs

If you look too close you're gonna drown in my eyes

Feel that buzz on your clit, that chill down your spine?

The way your nipples got hard when you read that last line....

There's all kinds of sex ma, and what’s really so tragic

Is you ran into a man who practices sex-majick

My ritual is ecstasy, your mind is my chalice

So, accept the blade with absolutely no malice

Don't confuse the issue with declarations of love

I'll deflect them and slide into your heart like a glove

Have you sprung like a trap and strung the fuck out

Panting "please, papi, please!" between your orgasm shouts

This ain't what you asked for when you walked through the door

Now look at you!  Sweating moaning on the floor...

Damn baby girl!  You thought it was just passion?

You got double-crossed and shot down by an erotic assassin

C'mon just accept it, give up the struggle

Crawl over here so I can stick this pin in your bubble

Kinda cute how you squirm and push it in deeper

Y'all come back now, ya hear?  The price will get steeper

Before long you can't leave, don't even wanna

You're avoiding your friends and lying to mamma

You swear it's over, but won't look at the door

Tell yourself it's " the last time" just gotta git you one more

And maybe just a quick one right after that...

Funny, you know where home is, but you can't make it back

So, when you finally hate me down deep in your heart

Remember, I told you all this right at the start

                                    DANK


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Chaos128 commented on Right At The Start

07-15-2009

I can hear the reggaeton backbeat on this saga now! Your meaning is clear and nobody can say you're tryin' to blow smoke, but mix in a little sweet talk to soften the message, bother, ha ha. It definitely ups the batting average.

DANK

07/15/2009

Thanx Chaos, tune ur imagination to a deep, raspy growl in a Brooklyn accent, LMAOOOOOOO!!! Any way thanks for the comment

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

DANK’s Poems (20)

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My Opposite End 1
Riffin' Riffin' 0
IF YOU KNEW 0
YOU WANT ME 0
Something? Nothing? 0
Mr. Rude 3
I'm Not Sure If That Matters 1
What Should We Do...? 1
Grrr! 0
Still Crazy... 0
untitled 2
SADOMASOCISTI
C CRIMINALTHOUG
HTS
1
HaHa!!! 0
The Last Time 0
A Gleam In The Eastern Sky 1
In Love 0
Why Aren't You Crying? 4
The Crucible 0
L-OVER 0
Right At The Start 1