The Crucible

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The Crucible

The Crucible

Sometimes I wonder what's up with me

I live life so rough and brutally

Call 'em excuses if you like, I've got my reasons

Too gone for too long, endless seasons...

It's hard to tell now in the light of my flame

That there were actually times I forgot my own name

If you live in the jungle too long, you become an animal

Hard, forged in pain, shaped on life's anvil

Quenched in blood, lust and acidic desire

With the heat and intensity of wild, white-hot fire

 

DANK

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Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

DANK’s Poems (20)

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My Opposite End 1
Riffin' Riffin' 0
IF YOU KNEW 0
YOU WANT ME 0
Something? Nothing? 0
Mr. Rude 3
I'm Not Sure If That Matters 1
What Should We Do...? 1
Grrr! 0
Still Crazy... 0
untitled 2
SADOMASOCISTI
C CRIMINALTHOUG
HTS
1
HaHa!!! 0
The Last Time 0
A Gleam In The Eastern Sky 1
In Love 0
Why Aren't You Crying? 4
The Crucible 0
L-OVER 0
Right At The Start 1