True Love and sweet bitterness

19 Comments

Tags:
  • Bittersweet Love
    • ladydraeko
    • What a year...and it keeps getting better...

    True Love and sweet bitterness

     The constant ring of pain
    Wracks my entire being
    in the wakefullness of the day
    Something more that i am seeing

    Open eyes to what's in store
    Beyond the bells of pain
    A life, a future, joyous times
    And sadness when it rains

    The kiss of teardrops on leaves
    The tenderness of my soul
    I am old but young inside myself
    Like a new born foal

    Life gives joy, peace brings hope
    My world is no longer torn
    I don't have to worry anymore
    My life is no longer scorned

    Love surrounds and blankets my being
    Wraps its tender mercies around me
    The endless flow of love surrounds
    It's branches are like a tree

    Blossoms and blooms
    Are the way of the spring
    Everything new in the air
    Takes me to a special place, lovers fling

    As each moment ticks and slides away
    I feel the love renewed
    Each day a song to sing to me
    Like the tender drops of dew

    Wash me in the morning rays
    My heart beats just for you
    Tell me you love me one more time
    I know my love is true

    JJB 6/8/09

    Poem Comments

    (19)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    LesHale commented on True Love and sweet bitterness

    06-15-2009

    Amazing poem. You wrote this very well. I love it. its great. you express feelings in this poem. keep up the great work
    Reply to Comment

    MysticFire commented on True Love and sweet bitterness

    06-12-2009

    wow!!! this poem reads with such ease of flow and meter, great imagery.you express to all that hope shines through for a new and better day if we just hold on gor the time it may take to walk in the sun.I love this!!!
    Reply to Comment

    BDIsernhagen commented on True Love and sweet bitterness

    06-09-2009

    well, the bells of my comment echo what everyone else had said! Thank you for recomending it to me, lest it slip by!
    Reply to Comment

    GucciGurl commented on True Love and sweet bitterness

    06-08-2009

    Well my lady you are indeed more than just a chatter online. I do like your work very much. I love how u say wash me in the morning rays my heart beats just for you. Great words
    Reply to Comment

    passionsdance commented on True Love and sweet bitterness

    06-08-2009

    The serenity of the poem leaves the reader wanting it for themselves. I covet the idea of finding suche peace . well written :)
    Reply to Comment

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    ladydraeko’s Poems (22)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Amigo Mio 6 06/19/2010
    Little Girl Lost 13 06/21/2009
    Going Fishing 3 06/20/2009
    Questions Abound 7 06/19/2009
    Dancing with Mommy 9 06/17/2009
    The First Birthday 8 06/16/2009
    True Love and sweet bitterness 19 06/08/2009
    To the sea 14 06/05/2009
    Dear Mommy 14 06/05/2009
    Choices 12 06/05/2009
    The Ocean 5 06/04/2009
    Who Am I? 12 06/04/2009
    Following Me... 5 06/03/2009
    Awake From Darkness 5 06/03/2009
    Infinite 19 06/02/2009
    The Dead of Night 12 06/02/2009
    Life quickly changes - The story continues - 3 06/02/2009
    The Search Complete 14 06/01/2009
    My Hidden Self 6 06/01/2009
    I love you 9 05/30/2009
    Darkness Emerges 8 05/30/2009
    Silent Serpent 21 05/29/2009
    Top of Page