Going Fishing

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    Going Fishing

     Out on the water
    Ripples surround me
    Will that one be caught
    The one whom can be mine
    Sun blazing upon my back
    Gurgles, splashes, waves
    Will I find the one who's to be mine
    Cast in the line
    Quietly sitting, waiting
    Splashes turn to struggle
    Reel it in, capture it
    Bring in the net
    What do I find
    Is it my treasure
    Or is it not
    It slips away
    Under the water
    Will I find mine today
    Cast in the water again
    Simply waiting
    Always searching
    Waiting for my treasure
    In the vastness
    Of the water
    Take me fishing
    All my days

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    stiches commented on Going Fishing

    06-20-2009

    very interesting its as if your at peace when fishing also a wondrous time of courotisy very cool.
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    peacepoet commented on Going Fishing

    06-20-2009

    great imagery i feel like im there never lose hope it is the only thing that can keep you going on you will find your treasure it just might not be what you planned
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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