The Ocean

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  • Daily Contest
    • ladydraeko
    • What a year...and it keeps getting better...

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    This is my submission to the daily challenge good luck to all

    The Ocean

     The Ocean

    Churning, pushing, flowing in and out
    Waves crash leaving me upside down
    Moving swiftly through the ebb and flow
    I find myself turned all around

    In the depths of the ocean's floor
    I am but a stranger to the sea
    Schools of angelfish kiss my face
    How long under the water can I be

    Drifting, swimming, floating by
    Colors dance in the rays of light
    Gliding, dancing, floating surrounds
    For me it's such a short flight

    Bubbles rise, my time is up
    Depart from angel's kiss
    Yearning, longing for more time
    In the ocean is what I will miss
    6/4/09

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    mamasan commented on The Ocean

    11-06-2009

    It is amazing that even submerged at the bottom of the ocean you are able to set these verses on their way to tell your tale. I sure enjoyed the read and wish you luck in the daily competition. mamasan
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    kmeadows commented on The Ocean

    06-22-2009

    omg I loved this. I love nature poems and this is a great one! Very good and I cant wait to read more!!!
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    DragonAngel commented on The Ocean

    06-08-2009

    I am an ocean lover and spent a lot of time scubba diving in it and have to say I felt as if I was there again hehehe bravo awsome work keep up the great work
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    avengingangel commented on The Ocean

    06-04-2009

    great as always but why so short i was great look at how the poems flow out of you like you dont need to think you just writeamazing
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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