My Hidden Self

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    My Hidden Self

    My Hidden Self

    Trapped in darkness...shadows emerge

    Coldness sweeps over my face....

    Darkness, emptiness, loneliness, fear...

    Are hidden away in that place...

     

    Tears wash away the pain for a time...

    Blank stares into nothingness prevails...

    Broken and torn, limbs aching and spent...

    Empty promises always set sail...

     

    Terror and rage are comfort and joy...

    Anxiety is my best friend...

    Emptiness takes the place of a song...

    Despair and gloom is what I comprehend...

     

    Staring outside into darkness and doom...

    Panic and fear paralyses my muscles...

    Unable to scream, cry or speak out...

    Away from the thorns and the thistles...

     

    Where are you, why did you leave me...

    What did I do to make you hurt me so bad...

    How can my innocence be taken away...

    Filling my heart with one feeling... so sad...

     

    Spare me this turmoil, this heartache and pain...

    Release me from my chains and bondage...

    Rip apart my inner being, spare me from this agony...

    Cast the demon into the garbage...

     

    Banish the darkness, the fear and the pain...

    Release me from my dispair...

    Torment and rage and ugliness lost...

    Take away the memories unfair

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    almartin1993 commented on My Hidden Self

    09-27-2009

    very deep, kinda fits with myself, i was raped but i dont hate men, i just have a deep feeling of anger, and pain, hidden inside so far down no one can ever see it unless i write something...
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    Gertrude commented on My Hidden Self

    06-03-2009

    Very deep! That's is how I feel about my real self. That it's hidden away so I can't get hurt again. Keep it up!
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    Chi commented on My Hidden Self

    06-03-2009

    This ones a personal poem.It has. I enjoyed the emotion you put into this one and powerful word structure. I rated this poem a 45. Chi.
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    Paolo commented on My Hidden Self

    06-01-2009

    There is nothing new here. All of the phrases are used too often, so often that they are banal and this piece becomes uninteresting.
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    SilverGirl commented on My Hidden Self

    06-01-2009

    Wow.. I feel your pain.. and anguish., and I am able to totally relate to it. I hope this is not something that you have gone through.. though I know in my heart you have..Great descriptive writing too! Hugs SIlver Girl
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    SilverGirl

    06/01/2009

    dang i hit submit and forgot to rate it.. dang it all.. grrrrrrrrr. think the owner of the site could fix that for me or would have time to? I give you a ten .. great work!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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