TOO STONED TO WRITE

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    • Waiting for escrow to close on our new house in Vegas...will still visit Mexico often! Sorry I've been away so long from this site! Great to be "home" :D

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    IF YOU HAVE EVER BEEN HERE, YOU CAN RELATE. FUNNY, BUT THAT'S THE WAY IT REALLY CAN BE, LOL! THANKS! HOPE YOU ENJOYED! (ROSE) :)

    TOO STONED TO WRITE

    I am sitting here just thinking

     But my mind keeps wandering off.

     No my friend, it wasn't drinking

     That was causing me to cough!

     

     I was going to blow your mind,

     With such startling revelations,

     Of the "other-worldly" kind

     When I lost all concentration!

     

     It's an everyday occurrence,

     When you live in Mexico.

    “ Acapulco Gold” transference,

     Makes the brain synapses slow.

     

    I was ready to reveal,

    Secrets of the Universe,

    When all motor neurons squealed

    And my thoughts went in reverse!

     

     So I sat and gazed around

     Trying hard to find a trace

     Of the musings that I'd found

     Nope, still nothing; all erased.

     

     Guess I'll go back to my terrace;

     Fire one up, enjoy the night.

     I'm not shy and not embarrassed,

     I'm just too damn stoned to write!

     

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    DeepEclipse commented on TOO STONED TO WRITE

    01-21-2010

    Hahahah how ironic. You wrote about your muse's failure in victorious fashion. Making something out of nothing. High but still focused :) Nice.
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    queenrosered

    01/21/2010

    TYVM Deep, you soooo get it!! LOL! Yes! That is IT, exactly! Too Stoned to Write, but then...I wrote this, lmao!! Thanks again, LOVE your poetry too! Love, Light, Peace, Rose! XD

    Rodcen commented on TOO STONED TO WRITE

    01-20-2010

    Is 4:20 .... 4 sure and 4 certain it is :-) .... Light one up for me
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    queenrosered

    01/21/2010

    You got it Rod, can and WILL do, lol! Thanks! Peace, Light, and Love, Rose! XD

    Mextizo commented on TOO STONED TO WRITE

    01-16-2010

    Ha i was wrong it must be some good shhhhh over there good right
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    queenrosered

    01/17/2010

    Right ON Mex, lmao! REALLY good shit, my friend!! Thanks!! Love, Rose! XD

    Rygar commented on TOO STONED TO WRITE

    01-16-2010

    ha! awesome write, i loved the the way you described being to stoned but in such a lucid and intellectual way. the juxtaposition of being high and lucid made this an awesome read! great job.
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    Hiporlacking commented on TOO STONED TO WRITE

    11-07-2009

    Haha. I got a big kick out of this. Whoa man...you just blew my mind. Let's be friends.
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    queenrosered

    11/07/2009

    You got it dude(ette?) LOL! Smokin! LOL! Thanks so much for the great review, can ya dig it? I knew ya could, (wink) LOL!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.
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