The clock is ticking

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    The clock is ticking
    New year
    new life
    new world
    new ties
    New experiences
    New friends
    the new year has come again

    Time turns
    Calendars change
    Everything isn't the same
    sometimes we are standing still in time waiting
    seeing crowds moving while quietly observing
    Tentative are we noticing everything

    New way of life things change
    people change
    for the good  or the worse

    Time is ticking
    can you hear the clock clicking
    tick,tok,tick,tok

    New day arises
    with new surprises in store

    Humanity is running out off time
    no morels
    no reason of living
    suside and cutting and bleeding
    self affliction
    internal affliction
    world affliction

    the clock is ticking

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    1990lh commented on The clock is ticking

    05-30-2010

    ww this was deep, the beginning was a light read, but then whoa you really hit something big. these are words we all should have inour minds. excellent poem
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    victornewman commented on The clock is ticking

    02-05-2010

    nice poem but i would really want to know your source of inspiration
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    BrittKun

    03/03/2010

    The new year and how much time we have left here on earth after every year. Thanks for the comment

    bklynrizz commented on The clock is ticking

    01-24-2010

    A unique write. I liked its quick tempo. My grandmother will be 98 this April. I think she could relate to this poem more than anybody. Nice write.
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