the river

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    the river

    The River

     

    We went down to the river

    Down to the stream

    Breathing in the breath of life

    God only could bring

     

    Down by the river

    We washed away our pain

    Down by the river it's always the same

     

    So where is hope?

    It’s in the river

    Where is life?

     It’s in the stream

     Where my soul can live again

     

    So I'm going down by the river

    Down by the stream

    Where the breath life is

    So I can breathe again

     

    So IAm will be their

    He's  going down by the river today

    I 'm going give my life to his name

     

    I'm swimming fast and swimming strong

    I'm swimming in this narrow river all along

    Down by the river today.

     

     

    Down by the river

    Down by

    The stream

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on the river

    08-26-2010

    that was a beautiful write of inspiration and hope dear.......you will find the light, hope and love of life in everything around you that lives. it is in the trees, the grass, the sky, the moon & sun, in every insect, bird and animal in mother natures realm.......for He gifted us with Her mighty grace to bring us peace and joy......open your heart and She will bring the light of peace and love into you........beautiful write dear........love asha
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    BrittKun

    08/26/2010

    Thank you so much. I was writing about my passion to be more closer to The Lord Jesus "the great I am in this particular piece which i want to make into a song. Thanks for your support on my writing It makes me so happy people appreciate my work sending my love Britt

    ApaqRasgirl

    08/26/2010

    your welcome dear, and I think it would make a wonderful song.....you can even lay your poem out in versus like a song and let people see that you want it to be a song as well as a poem.......your inspiration is felt all through your words dear........keep em coming.......love asha

    ansari commented on the river

    05-31-2010

    Its a great poem and also a beautiful song. Life is so close to nature and to God. It has a nice rhythm , 'down by the river' the melody haunts me. You have entwined self, God and nature and that is how it is. I loved it. Thank you, hope you'll read my poem "Oh! every breath of fresh air " welcome your comments.
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    lisagrizzly commented on the river

    12-27-2009

    I was baptized in a pool of water down by the river. I love this poem. It is so inspirational when you know the Great I Am:) Ty for the walk back in memory lane for me through your moving like a stream of water poem:)
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    BrittKun

    01/01/2010

    thanks I glad someone could relate to the poem.

    Vampire commented on the river

    12-26-2009

    kinda has the fel like a blues grass song i know. "as i went down to the river to pray." beautiful song and a beautiful job.
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    BrittKun

    12/26/2009

    I love that song!!!! But that's not were my inspiration came from. Thanks for the comment! : )

    bklynrizz commented on the river

    12-22-2009

    A part from a few grammatical errors this was a very heart warming and inspirational poem. I am that I am. Nice. I wonder how many know who He is?
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    BrittKun

    12/25/2009

    Not many are close enough to know who he is! Thanks for the comment.!!! : )

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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