The Broken Heart

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  • Dead Love
    • kpeery09
    • "Never Compromise not even in the face of Armageddon"-Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach from Watchmen movie

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    this is how Im feeling when my girlfriend broke up with me.

    The Broken Heart

    My heart feels the pain,
    My heart is shattered.
    Distorted into a heart of darkness,
    I pray my heart will heal from this pain.
    I feel the hole in my chest, the hole where my heart used to be.
    I see no heart,
    My heart is gone,
    you took my heart when you took away our love.
    I have no heart,
    I feel no love,
    and
    No sorrow.
    I only feel depression creeping up to me,
    as my heart feels this pain it cant let go of what she did to me.
    My heart will be missing,
    who will find my heart.
    I hope one day I will fall in love again,
    but for now I'm in search for the chest that my heart lies in.
    My heart is now a Broken Heart.

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    chichigurl89 commented on The Broken Heart

    02-21-2010

    very well written.... i like this one!!.............
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    Sydney commented on The Broken Heart

    02-19-2010

    this i feel a lot of sorrow. i can understand this. this has a nice flow. and its good to write about how you feel.
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    Dancer022597 commented on The Broken Heart

    02-19-2010

    Aw im sorry that u have to go through this....heart break isnt a pretty thing. Good job though and good work!
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    dumplin commented on The Broken Heart

    02-19-2010

    My heart has been broken so many times...it is torn and tattered and scarred. I know from experience that you will fall in love again. I like the style of this. I could almost see you acting it out on stage...speaking to this woman standing off to the side and then aiming your words and emotions at the audience. The passion and pain you could display in reading this aloud would be magnificent...tear jerking.
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