Performing on Stage

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    • kpeery09
    • "Never Compromise not even in the face of Armageddon"-Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach from Watchmen movie

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    This poem is based on a friend of mine when she had to perform for solo and ensamble contest for high school.

    Performing on Stage

    I'm on stage, the feeling of uneasiness comes to my stomach.
    I get nervous, not able to sing on stage.
    As I wait for my name to be said to come on the stage I take a deep breath.
    I tell myself to stay calm as I perform.
    I heard my name, I come to the stage to perform.
    As I sing I see the audience dazzled by my voice.
    They stared at me like I had a voice of an angel that was delivered from Heaven.
    As I finished the song the audience raised out of there seats for a standing ovation.

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    stever commented on Performing on Stage

    12-13-2009

    do you realy sing...most of my poems/songs..have been used in bands i have been in...so cool...

    stever

    12/13/2009

    oh srry see it was someone else

    SuperChick76 commented on Performing on Stage

    12-12-2009

    Very nice. I loved some of the words you used. I did notice that you tended to repeat yourself. Maybe look into finding new ways of saying the same thing, so that the reader doesn't feel... redundant. Beautifully written. I enjoyed it greatly. Good job.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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