The Beautiful Girl

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    • kpeery09
    • "Never Compromise not even in the face of Armageddon"-Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach from Watchmen movie

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    I tried making this seem like a short story/ story poem, hopefully you all like it.

    The Beautiful Girl

    I see her staring at me in the bar.
    I walk towards her as she slowly looks away,
    I greet my pressence to her seeing her eyes glow like the light of heaven.
    As I heard her beautiful voice, I asked her out.
    She told me yes, as we made out, we slowly walked to her apartment door.
    Her eyes looked as if they came from the ocean itself, her smile came from a heavenly angel, her hair came from the clouds we see among us everyday. Her skin felt like it came from a place known as Heaven,
    I felt this body on me,
    making something truly beautiful.
    As I awoke the next day I saw her next to me awake, I thought to myself is this a dream,
    she laid to me pregnant with our child.
    She whispered to me this is not a dream, my wonderful husband.
    I never knew till then what I have is a beautiful girl as my wife.

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    Dancer022597 commented on The Beautiful Girl

    01-05-2010

    oh its so sweet but full of feeling! Great job! Keep it up!
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    dumplin commented on The Beautiful Girl

    01-05-2010

    Always remember this feeling. It will get you through any kind of strife.
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    nonners commented on The Beautiful Girl

    01-05-2010

    its nice to see uplifting words and see the love on paper so to speak-so later on when you two are married and have a fight-go back n read this. i loved it
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    SuperChick76 commented on The Beautiful Girl

    01-05-2010

    The imagery was very nicely done. It was a very sweet, beautiful poem. Good job.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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