Sunday Rain

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    Sunday Rain

    In its uttermost attempts to hit the ground before the others,
    water races toward the ground escaping clouds, where they were smothered.
    I listen as I lay to a pitter patter lullaby
    only wishing instead of me alone, there is a you and I.
    Don't you feel it as I do,
    The urge to stay in bed
    on these laxy daisy Sundays
    Where our love can bloom instead?

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    ForeverPoet commented on Sunday Rain

    10-09-2012

    love it! there is something magical in the sound of rain. It can lull me to sleep, leave me wanting, as much as it can define my mood. lying in bed with someone, while the rain falls, can be so sensual, and calming. nice write. makes me look forward to the next thunderstorm........................................."F"

    Crush commented on Sunday Rain

    10-01-2012

    beautiful, beautiful write. i was just talking about this very thing to someone yesterday. the rain drummed on my roof and i lie in bed, loving it. thank you.

    Pocahantas

    10/03/2012

    Thank you

    lisaner commented on Sunday Rain

    10-01-2012

    Well written poem- Nice images of enjoying a "laxy daisy" Sunday morning storm, but with the nostalgia of aloneness.

    Pocahantas

    10/07/2012

    Yes thank you :)

    poetryprincess commented on Sunday Rain

    10-01-2012

    Love the write continue writing no matter what! This should be known as deep and moving!

    Pocahantas

    10/07/2012

    Thanks and I most certainly will :)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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