Muddy Water

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Muddy Water

Thoughts clouded in muddy water...

Nothing grounded in my mind.
Sinking with no one to hold me up against the grind.
The only comfort I take is knowing God is still there,
so my loneliness doesn't turn into despair.
Why is everyone so fixated in their lives?
when the poor are still poor, and the helpless still deprived?
Look up from the sidewalk!
Step out of your shoes!
Why don't you take a closer look around you?
We are the people, you'll forget me in mere seconds,
and our greeting too, while our half hearted smile beckons.
But then someone emerges, right out the blue,
smiling back and asking "Hey! How are you?"
So I'm reminded there is a pulse right here on Earth,
and goodness is on the countryside seated by the hearth,
and light is all around us, if we step out of the shade,
and our thoughts are most clear where our heart stays...


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Crush commented on Muddy Water

01-15-2013

I love this and the feeling it provides. You have talent and it is always a pleasure reading you.

Pocahantas

08/10/2013

I know I'm extremely late but I wanted to thank you for all your wonderful comments :)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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The Present 1
Stuck 0
This Thing we Call Love 1
Enough 1
I understand now 0
Why I didn't do my homework 0
Take my Hand 2
Muddy Water 1
Empowerment 0
Back at it Again 1
Family meeting 1
Sunday Rain 4
Much too Much 3
All Aboard!!! 3
One and Only You 1
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My Brother and Me 1
Shadow of His wings 1
I Am My Music 2
Mischief Morning 1
Garden of My Heart 1