All Aboard!!!

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All Aboard!!!

"All aboard!" shouts out the train man.
"Where does it lead?" I ask as I stand.
"To a better place, far beyond your sight."
"Won't people miss me?" I ask.
"They might."
"But it's all for the best and I have to say,
that perhaps, you will see them one day."
"Is this a dream?" I ask.
"Could be,"
the man shrugs and turns his head to me.
His uniform is white, and his body glows.
I turn but see no one that I know.
Wordless, they board, soft comments at the sound
of the glowing man's welcome, a resonating pound.
All have entered, I'm the very last to stall.
It's time. This is it. This is the-
"LAST CALL!" the train man shouts.
It startles me, but I've figured it out.
I'm going home. I've been worth the paid price.

I step forward to enter my paradise.

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poetryprincess commented on All Aboard!!!

09-30-2012

LOVED IT! great write and very inspiring... and a little thought provoking. well. I have to say this means a lot to read this in my case!

Phission commented on All Aboard!!!

09-29-2012

well done. very entertaining. sometimes i hesitate to say that a poem is "entertaining" because i know that most of my poems are not meant to entertain ( and maybe i need to take a chill pill...lol ). this is a wonderful story/poem. tight with visuals.

Pocahantas

09/29/2012

thanks a lot. while some of my poems are meant to be more serious than entertaining, I enjoy telling stories. Always have. This one in particular was meant to inspire, entertain, and provoke thought. I will be posting more vastly different poems/stories. Thank you for your comment :)

cttgad commented on All Aboard!!!

09-26-2012

love it! Reminds me of an old gospel song called "Glory Train"

Pocahantas

09/26/2012

Thank you :)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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