Much too Much

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Much too Much

It's much, too much to consider all that I do,
to let the bad in, and goodness subdue.
It's much, too much to dwell on a thought
that destroys my mind, yet still lifts me up.
It's much, too much to always hear what's wrong.
How about a change of talk? How about a new song?
Let's change the mood, and forget about money.
Instead of partly cloudly, why not partly sunny?
I'm tired of the bad, bad talk, bad thoughts,
bad people, bad grades, bad cars, bad jobs.
I want to live in the sun and eat light for breakfast
For lunch, energy,
For dinner, love steadfast.
Is it much, too much to ask?
Yeah, I know.
Gotta endure the rain before the sun will show.

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ForeverPoet commented on Much too Much

10-09-2012

nicely done! nice flow, and description. " live in the sun, and eat light for breakfast".......Brilliant indeed!..................................."F"

Pocahantas

10/11/2012

Thanks!

poetryprincess commented on Much too Much

09-29-2012

and yes the sun will shine with a double rainbow waiting in the distance!

Pocahantas

09/29/2012

thanks!

poetryprincess

09/30/2012

No probs... but it's too true not to type it! :)

Crush commented on Much too Much

09-27-2012

there is just something about you. brilliance, maybe. very very nice poem. " i want to live in the sun and eat light for breakfast" floored me .

Pocahantas

09/27/2012

thanks so much :)

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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