Sadie Hawkins

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    I wrote this to ask a guy to the Sadie Hawkin's dance... well....he said no...oh well, we cant get them all...

    Sadie Hawkins

     I know our acquaintance has not been long,
    but listen here as I try to be strong,
    I know I'm shy, as you probably see,
    but I would like you to get to know the real me,
    poetry is my best way to comprehend,
    how it's a great guy like you I want to befriend,
    so please give this relationship a chance,
    and lets get to know each other at the dance!

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    ShadowStealer commented on Sadie Hawkins

    09-28-2010

    What a great idea! Oh, well, he missed out. I'm glad to see that you don't seem that down about it though. ShadowStealer
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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