Mind Games

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    Mind Games
    Comets streak through moonlit skies
    inspiring awe in human minds
    and hearts that try to fathom all the whys

    With eyes we see and hearts we feel
    but truly it's our minds emotions steal
    as in breathless whispers
    we question what is real

    The world is false, so much untrue
    and yet there's still someone like you
    whose guileless eyes and smile I knew
    would somehow break my heart in two
    but still I loved you

    As long as comets race through space and time
    your face will stay within the confines
    of my mind
    Till time unwinds

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    jademelissa74 commented on Mind Games

    08-13-2009

    Ahhh, the essence of LOVE! You speak of it so well. It seems as if though in all of your days, you have tasted every drop of each and every of it's components. Amazingly arranged. Here you have me back for more....
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    BridgetBowen

    08/13/2009

    I have thank you...right now I'm on the downside of it though and it's so painful. Thank you so much for your kind words.

    jademelissa74

    08/13/2009

    Pain dies. It always does. Even when it seems impossible. Even when each tick of the clock aches like the pulse of blood behind a bruise. I have lived, laughed, and cried enough to earn the right to say that Pain dies. It always does. Even when it seems impossible. Keep you head up my friend, God will never take you where his grace cannot protect you. :)) I'm here for you!

    BridgetBowen

    08/13/2009

    Thank you so much. I know it will go away eventually but it hurts so much right now the days seem endless, the nights eternity. The memories will never die.Thank you again.

    magicmanzz commented on Mind Games

    02-05-2009

    super job you have a romantic heart
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    timeoutofmind commented on Mind Games

    11-17-2008

    Hooray,,optimism still lives, I tried to join the optimists club, but I didnt think they would take me,,,great read!!
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    Vincent commented on Mind Games

    10-30-2008

    (people) sorry misspelled, enjoyed your poem
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    Vincent commented on Mind Games

    10-30-2008

    Poeople and places and the games they play, not realizing that a heart is on the line, they break it, they smash it, because they can't feel or trust their on emoutions because they are so afraid of being hurt, or some times their just incapable. enj
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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