Beginnings

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    Beginnings
    A door closes,
    gently, almost silently
    Footsteps echo
    going away

    An unshed tear lingers,
    but is gently nudged aside by a smile
    Somewhere a door opens
    revealing still more corridors to tomorrow

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    lorenzo commented on Beginnings

    06-04-2009

    simple, profound heartfelt, soulful beautiful... (the rules say comments must be a minimum of 100 characters) so i'll say it again, beautiful !
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    Danphan commented on Beginnings

    06-02-2009

    short, simple and full of lived. This is a poem that gently guided a hopeless person back to reality.
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    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Beginnings

    12-27-2008

    I enjoyed this. It was quite refreshing; like drinking warm chamomile tea while sitting in the Bay Window watching as rain streak down its panes.
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