Finality

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    Finality
    The end is near
    No time to spare
    No time to shed a million tears
    No time to conquer all my fears

    The time is nigh
    No more whys
    No more sighs
    No more goodbyes

    The days go by
    Soon he must fly
    And I must try
    Not to die








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    laydbak1 commented on Finality

    08-05-2009

    Outstanding short write here which tells it all in only a few short lines... You've captured the frustration, the angst, the acceptance of the inevitable here... Great write... Try two of mine along this same sentiment... My Last Goodbye, and I Ain't Takin' Anymore....
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    BridgetBowen

    08/05/2009

    Thank you once again. I will read them.

    famous commented on Finality

    05-08-2009

    Nice poem and so true when we lose someone we love. I have been there to much lately.
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    Grito commented on Finality

    04-15-2009

    Don't change a thing, strong bold and powerful, it stings.
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