Knotted bot heart

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    Knotted bot heart
    So deep I look and the ripples of ocean
    A puddle deep enough equipped with emotion
    Keep penning every page don't stop igniting
    let it all out. You got to keep on fighting
    contained deep down begging to be freed
    Burning grief at the last fiery embers of need
    planting a seed in the ground it should grow
    Will your feet help through the heart ache and sorrow
    Is the time not time enough to borrow
    A memory a moment a thought real enough to know
    That with out the thought without the memory
    Who am I, when no one remembers me, why is there worry
    I don't want to die but I'm way to scared to live
    How much fear will I have when I've none left to give
    So deep I look and the ripples of ocean
    A puddle deep enough equipped with emotion
    Keep penning every page don't stop igniting
    let it all out. You got to keep on fighting
    contained deep down begging to be freed
    Burning grief at the last fiery embers of need
    planting a seed in the ground it should grow
    Will your feet help through the heart ache and sorrow
    Is the time not time enough to borrow
    A memory a moment a thought real enough to know
    That with out the thought without the memory
    Who am I, when no one remembers me, why is there worry
    I don't want to die but I'm way to scared to live
    How much fear will I have when I've none left to give

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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