A hollow log

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    A hollow log
    To be quite frank
    I drew a blank
    For the field of vision
    Has had a collision
    The words that you say
    Put calmness at bay
    As I realise I don't want this
    Nor need it for I don't miss
    The lack of attention
    For I can see the intention
    Closed for no one not even you
    Now tell me what I should do
    So I look all around 
    People looking me up and down
    Throwing me sentences of lust
    Fuelling a fire that with a gust
    Takes the moment into a torrent
    Smile don't cause a fuss so ignorant
    Life gets up and tells you to smile
    Cos when you did they felt it worthwhile
    Can't help but wonder just how so
    Can affect cause effect and from it grow
    To be quite frank
    I drew a blank
    For the field of vision
    Has had a collision
    The words that you say
    Put calmness at bay
    As I realise I don't so want to remiss
    Nor need it for I don't in sorrow miss
    The lack of attention
    For I can see the intention

    Closed for no one not even you
    Now tell me what I should do
    So I look all around this town
    People looking at me up and down
    Throwing me sentences of lust
    Fuelling a fire that with a gust
    Takes the moment into a torrent
    Smile don't cause a fuss so ignorant
    Life gets up and tells you to smile
    Cos when you did they felt it worthwhile

    Can't help but wonder just how so
    Can affect cause effect and from it grow

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    sevyn7 commented on A hollow log

    02-16-2014

    Wow, this poem was amazing, I see the passion in your writing, Like a rainbow in the dark.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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