In the end

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  • Lost Love
    • dragongarcia
    • Losing everything I loved but trying to keep going

    In the end
    When we were together everything was good
    Everything was fine
    We trusted each other
    We loved each other
    Fought to stay together
    But now it doesn’t matter
    Because in the end it didn’t even matter
    I loved you more than anything
    And now you’re gone
    You believed them
    And they deceived us
    In the end, I’m alone
    I sacrificed my time
    I sacrificed my heart
    And you tore it apart
    Even though I loved you more than life
    It doesn’t matter
    Because in the end you’re gone

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    frog commented on In the end

    05-12-2009

    This poem interests the reader in the side of things we don't always see-how hurtful ideas or actions from others can so deeply hurt one's soul.
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    mrobb6488 commented on In the end

    03-09-2009

    Well since we spoke about honest comments I just want to let you know that you have really great material but you should try to broaden your horizons. It's always a good thing to try to write about something different ever once in a while. Something that actually works really well take a poem by a famous poet and write one in the very same format but make it your own of course. It broadens your horizons and provides a way in which you can find new fresh inspiration for something else.
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    dragongarcia

    06/19/2009

    thanks ill try but lately ive just been depressed and not writing very much

    dragongarcia

    06/19/2009

    thanks ill try but lately ive just been depressed and not writing very much

    brandon commented on In the end

    03-09-2009

    i know how u feel
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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