Hot and Bothered

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    Hot and Bothered
    All hot and bothered,
    And nowhere to turn,
    You are the one,
    that's making me burn.

    It's been a long time
    So be nice to me now,
    I have to remember,
    I hope I know how.

    Frustrated and wanting,
    I'm constantly damp,
    You're so far away,
    Kinda hard to vamp.

    So, what do you want,
    What can I do,
    It's like the first time,
    When eveything was new.

    Just seeing you once,
    For a short time,
    All I can think is,
    Oh, how sublime.

    Making me crazy,
    Making me want,
    All the old feelings,
    Back with a jaunt.

    The feelings are old,
    But definitely there,
    What will you think,
    When you lay me bare.

    Waiting and wondering,
    Just how it will be,
    When finally,
    I have you inside of me.






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    tintex commented on Hot and Bothered

    01-01-2010

    this is the poem I meant to comment on: Am reading your poetry and can't help but, wonder are these narrations of spells you've been under? Or perhaps the yearnings and passions of youth; laid bare, exposing each moment of truth. What love, to endear, your heart did compel and rendered distended emotional swell; Intrigued I press, the ending to find yet, hoping I never come to the line. The final release of fantasy shared that I might be freed from that which I dared. Speak not if it's simply of days in the past; so fervent desire, I would that it last; for love enduring, yea it must be lest hope, defeated, surrender and flee. I beg you, ensure me the flower inside has yet a bloom not withered and died. Which dew in the morning and afternoon sun nurture to life as life was begun.
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    thiefinthenight commented on Hot and Bothered

    08-06-2009

    ok I must say if your up my way you have a place to hang your hat and write all day and watch the moon shine bright most every night so maybe someday I can learn your sight and hear your sound as this big old world turns round and round
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    LeLover

    08/27/2009

    I'll keep that in mind

    monkyntz commented on Hot and Bothered

    07-04-2009

    you are on fire girlfriend. this poem is smokin'. and with all the erotica aside. its very well written. you are definitely a talent. a pleasure to read thanks
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    AleaPendragon commented on Hot and Bothered

    06-04-2009

    Sweetly innocent for such a gangrenous need that takes and corrupts even the most basic of deeds, I want it, I need it, Anticipation it is for all of us in need. Thank you for the sweet poem.
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    kdarcy commented on Hot and Bothered

    05-04-2009

    Wooooo, I,there too, great write or read ... someone said oxygen?
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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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