Anticipation

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    Anticipation
    Wanting and wondering,
    Just how it will be,
    I swear the anticipation is killing me.

    The sound of your voice,
    Makes me tingle,
    Thinking of when our bodies will mingle.

    So hot and wet,
    Our bodies together,
    Making me feel light as a feather.

    Alas, not real,
    Just thoughts in my mind,
    I am ready to just unwind.

    Ready to let go,
    And your passion take me,
    Somewhere safe and warm to be.

    Paradise wanted,
    Paradise found,
    In your arms I am bound.

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    omari commented on Anticipation

    08-06-2013

    Hmm...this poem elicits a sensation below the waist. I enjoyed the imagery!
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    laydbak1 commented on Anticipation

    07-29-2009

    2am... Wake up... Remember the scene in the dream... Keep that movie running while the motor inside is humming... Find car keys, don't forget your purse, leave a note for the girlfriend on the answering machine, throw on an overcoat, set sail over to his house and knock on the door... Dreams come true for she who knows no limits... Good write...
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    dahlusion commented on Anticipation

    07-07-2009

    "So hot and wet, Our bodies together, Making me feel light as a feather" -- very sexy; this line brought my pants down to my knees.
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    monkyntz commented on Anticipation

    05-18-2009

    paradise is right.great work. i find some poetry just too complicated.you are so easy and pleasurable to read yet packed full of emotion
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    lightcourier commented on Anticipation

    05-01-2009

    I liked the meter of this. Fun and great to read. Enter paradise! Thanks.
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