HELL

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    Don't worry, I'm not suicidle although I don't care if i die tommorow. This is just what came to mind and I wrote it. I hope you like it..

    HELL

     I hope all is well my distant friends in Hell,
    I say this with kind and sweet words to tell.
    Earth is the top of the hell underneath,
    We live in torture and heartbreak, not in peace..

    They claim we are free, but nobody's fooling me.
    The ten commandments I long to see,
    One's we all claim to read,
    What happened to freedom of speech?

    The Government is the people who's controlling you and me..

    Think about it? All that's happened.. It's called reality..
    Some plead insanity & other's are just anxious human beings,
    We all want change and pray it will get better everyday..
    But the truth is the DEVIL is staring us right in the face.

    God is here and up above and all around us,
    Fact is, people forgot the real meaning of love..
    The silence is, we are all human bombs waiting to go off,
    Lies and deceit tied into SINS of ALL and We are the cause..

    This world will be shattered into peices like our hearts..
    One by one we will be blown apart,
    Some of us will have a brand new start,
    Other's it will be Good-bye forever and no starting over.

    Hell, is not just where we might go after death,
    It is here on earth of which we are forced to live..
    But God has gave us our every breath,
    So be thankful for the best and the worst of all that he gives..

    It was Jesus who died for all our ungodly sins..
    For that alone all our hearts should be broken!
    At the same time he sent us KIDS & HOPE to be whole again..
    That is the amazing gift of GOD & the ANGELS he sends us!

    The HEAVENLY GIFT OF LOVE here on earth and above,
    The Lord, our savior is what saves each and every one of us..
    Please, Pray and forgive and try your best to live!

    God will call us home when he's ready,
    And if we meet him before that time,
    He will still welcome us and take care of us,
    He will send our family and friends a different kind of love..
    Not to forget us or replace us but to remember us..

    HELL IS WHERE I AM, NOT WHERE I'LL BE...
    PLEASE, REMEMBER ME!

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    simplynicole commented on HELL

    05-14-2011

    I liked this Poem, thanks for sharing, a great write!
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    Coltsfan777 commented on HELL

    03-06-2011

    its great how you explain what hell is and try to convince people that it is not where God intended us to go. He has a much better place for us. The important thing is to get your life right with God before its too late because we never know when our time is up.
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    Worthless

    03/09/2011

    Amen to that.. Thanks!

    Olan01 commented on HELL

    01-20-2011

    "Hell is where I am, not where I will be..." Sweet and insightful. The control you speak of is not overt; it is social-- from birth to death; from family to religion to government the controls are subtle as we are raised in our environs and we conform to what others want of us. If everyone says it is red then we see red although color is abstract to ones vision. Well written and stated; love, peace and freedom, Olan.
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    REGINA2 commented on HELL

    01-20-2011

    I really loved this poem. I'm saving it to favorites. How very true and how very sad the human condition.
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