Elemental Rites

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    Four elements in a brief view.

    Elemental Rites

     Earth, wind, fire, and water, drawing near, in timeless footsteps, they appear.
    I seek the ocean, and seas in dreams their waters heal. 
    In life, their waters rising from the fathom's seal.
    The wind gathers from the four corners of the earth to give a movement to the air's circulation breath thus, proclaiming worth.
    The earth that nurtures the seed to feed the soul of life, is the kindred spirits loving wife.
    Hold the moment near the flames, when warmth speaks it delivers the fire's claim. 
    Day or night become the same when elemental rites call out in name.

    © Allseasonsverse 04/23/2019
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    phoenix29 commented on Elemental Rites

    10-28-2019

    a very good write that says alot,,check out my poem majestic, i think you will like it. PHOENIX
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